NaPoWriMo2016: Day 24½

A heavily reworked version of the poem that appeared here was accepted for publication by Your One Phone Call, but subsequently withdrawn due to my dissatisfaction with that journal’s editorial practices.


6 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo2016: Day 24½

  1. Superb

    shimmy440 posted: “Off to visit parents, and the brakes screech as the bus shudders, stopped on its haunches, I peek out the grimy window at the stretch of tired shops, that once were my city and my world. I bought my first record in that Chinese takeaway, but the chip shop”

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